Best story app ever!
Brilliant idea
Response from developer
Hello B. Thank you very much for your review and for your constructive feedback. English is not my first language and this is my first serious writing, so advices are appreciated!
Brilliant BUT
Response from developer
Hello E. Thank you for your review. I am glad you liked the game. And I understand your disappointment. We had no intentions to make it a surprise, we just wanted it to be integrated into the plot. And instead of making the whole game paid, we decided to let as many people as possible to try it before buying. Please, also consider the fact, that it has been told on the description of the game, that it has only 2 chapters for free and IAP for full version. Hope you will get my point and will be very happy if you will decide to change your rating . Thank you.
Beautiful in every aspect.
Response from developer
Hello! 🙌🙌 Thank you so much for your good words. Reviews as yours motivate me to keep going further and make more beautiful things. S.
Good at first but then a glitch
Response from developer
Hello B! Could you please get in touch with us via hello@maginary.app We will definitely help you solve this issue.
Amazing
I can also understand people being a little upset with the paywall. But I mean it’s only $5 that isn’t very much. Especially for something as creative as this. I have no problem supporting people who bring something fresh to this world. Especially something I have never experienced before. So a standing ovation for anyone involved in the making of this story
I also have an idea for a future project if ever one were to come along, a choose your own adventure story with the animations and puzzle like aspect of this story. I know that’s ambitious and would probably take a VERY long time but I think if it is as well made as this one, it would be great
Only issue was user error/impatient
Thank you! It was awesome and I’ll be waiting for whatever you do next!
P.S. never swipe if you think it might be an animated page. Read every word, be patient, and enjoy all the details put into every “page”
Contains inappropriate language
After reading several pages in I discovered a couple of words that would never be heard read out loud in a classroom environment (e.g. p***d off, and bast***).
I immediately stopped reading to the class and won’t continue in the future.
Response from developer
Hello Matt. I am very sorry to hear that. Please, accept my apologies. Probably one of the reasons is that English is not our first language. We didn't know exactly how inappropriate these words were. We will absolutely change the age rating. Thank you for helping us with that. I also would be very happy, if you would consider changing your rating at least a little bit, as I hope you agree that 1 star doesn't represent the books total value (95% of people who read our book are not kids). Thank you for understanding.
Really good
An Interesting Game
Nevertheless, the reason I docked a star (I would’ve done a star and a half if I could) is because of the storyline. It’s just not very interesting. Maybe it picks up later on, I don’t know, but in the two chapters I was given I honestly wasn’t invested enough in the story to pay five dollars to read the entire book. I’m not saying that the story’s bad, nor that the pay-wall is ridiculous (let’s be honest, this game took a considerable amount of work to make, the developer deserves to be compensated). But it seems that you relied entirely on the gameplay of this game, and kind of half-assed the story. I also didn’t like that I was being guilt-tripped to buy the full version with the idea that Michael might die; that’s not what I came here for. So sorry, but I probably won’t buy the full version unless it goes on sale at some point.
~ MastaGamerita
Response from developer
Hello M. Thank you very much for your review. I am happy to hear you liked the idea. And of course It's a pity, the story didn't look quite interesting to you. I totally understand you, though. Probably that's because in the beginning I needed to show the readers all the rules, and it surely hurted the story a little. I hope, someday (when we will have a sale) you will decide to continue and will see, how it becomes better chapter after chapter.