TERRIBLE!!!!!!!
WoW! I can't even believe how bad it was. There was so many repetitive texts. AND, I didn't even do anything wrong and it killed me! SO BAD WHOEVER MADE THIS! PLEASE TAKE IT OFF THE APP STORE
0 star game
Written by a preteen. The endings are typical, nothing special about the plots, lack of storyline, and after all you can't really make your own story. Worthless
Could have been good, but...
At first, I was starting to like the plot and I liked the characters, but every ending that I've come to is simply stupid, most being death and one waking up and all of it being a dream. Too short. If this game was improved a lot, to what is acceptable, I would be happy about it. Good characters, starts well, but all of the endings I have found have annoyed me. Improving these things would make it a good game.
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Nou
It was awful, written by a preteen.
Not what I had hoped
The writing style in this game was passible, but I felt the weaknesses really kept the game from holding my interest. I felt like the main character had no identity, the writing is repetitious, and the ending (WARNING, VAGUE SPOILER) is horribly disjointed. Also a few of the responses redirect to incorrect pages.
That said, I felt like certain things about the story had promise and I hope the author will come out with a new game some day that is more polished.
That said, I felt like certain things about the story had promise and I hope the author will come out with a new game some day that is more polished.
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Not a good read
The game was alright.. But the way it's wrote with the same sentences such as "big giant bobble heads" is repeated over and over which makes me think the writer copied and pasted the same sentences throughout the game, and it is agreed that you are limited to your choices without dying.. All in all, I wouldn't of bought this game..
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Dissapointed
It's badly written and couldn't keep my attention.
Primitive Writing, Linear Story.
Don't bother with this game. Obviously written by a preteen who doesn't understand the first thing about writing or game development.
This was worthless
There has to be false reviews going on here because the was the absolute worst choice of game I've ever played nothing about it was good. The story was ok but it lacked everything that made the choice if games great. The use of skills and statistics, you couldn't control the story at all if you deviated you die, you didn't get to choose your sex, and you don't even get a name. This was the absolute worst choice of "hosted" game. Some of them are actually better than the regular games, but this was just absolute crap.
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I agree
The game makes you take one set path, if you stray from the path you die. There needs to be more ways the player can influence the game.
