It’s aight
I understand your a beginning app developer so congratulations, although Ik nothing about that lol. I will say I think if the story was first person with “I” instead of “you” it would be more immersive. I love the concept but it could have used more vivid imagery for example “manic spread across my face as I watched the decomposing corpse approach me in desperation, leaving blood dripping in its wake. It’s putrid smell invading my nose as it closed the distance between us. I stood. Frozen, yet my mind and heart were already running from the predicament ” but I’m not a critic or anything I’m just bored rn lol
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Response from developer
Hey Anton, thanks for your review! You’ve got really great writing skills! Would you be interested in helping me improve the story? If so please email me at yesnoapp2@gmail.com. Thanks!
