Grammar, Plot, Pain.
The grammar and spelling for the storyline is absolutely atrocious. I’m so sorry, but the way the characters are written reminds me of something stripped from wattpad, written by a 12 year old and their weird perception of high school life. The male characters swear like there’s no tomorrow, and half of the time, I can barely understand what anyone is trying to say. I admit to have wasted hours reading this story, only to be disappointed since it ultimately left me dissatisfied with a cliche graduation-type ending and little progression other than a blossomed friendship derived from hysterical jokes about slavery, turned romanticized of course. Whoever wrote this story, please…reread it. It’s not good and glorifies unhealthy relationship tropes. The most I could compliment is that the characters are pretty, that’s it. Everything else, I wouldn’t even bother.
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