Disappointed
Should’ve shown her naked.
Great but 1 thing
U should try it uncensored it be more romantic and more better reviews 👏👏
Things to add
I like this game. Some things to fix:
— a tree to see what options leads
to what paths. It will allow players to make different choices to get new endings
— better facial expressions the neighbor depending on the situation
— a tree to see what options leads
to what paths. It will allow players to make different choices to get new endings
— better facial expressions the neighbor depending on the situation
Censoring
Just why!? Put age +18 and get yourself famous! I’ll change to 5 stars after the uncensored version, keep the good work.
Decent
So I went into a couple and I gotta say sec for 7 hours wow!But actually not that bad story a little off but great short story overall
Potential
I waited for the game and preordered it, just played and well it has a lot of potential. It’s soo short though, and the censored part come on really should at least show us the goods. There’s no saving in the game which is annoying and there should be more characters to select from. I would like it if y’all added more to the story every week like an hour worth of stuff or more if that’s possible.
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Wouldn’t recommend
It’s a short game but honestly I’m sorta glad. I played through all 3 endings and I was rather surprised. So ima bring up some problems I found. If you don’t wanna read it all just skip to the bottom for a quick summary
The ‘art’
Firstly I’m going to address the elephant in the room. Which is the fact that ALL THE CHARACTERS and their art DO NOT belong to the developer! It’s all stolen and mildly edited from anime’s, whoever made the girls model and possibly other mobile games. If you didn’t know what anime the character came from you don’t have too because every time the protag (for example) speaks and the frankly terrible mouth drawn on lazily. The developer even knows this because back when this was in development and you could pre-order it a character -Jumin Han- was present with the same badly made mouth. To clarify, Jumin was ripped straight from a mobile dating game ‘mystic messenger’ and I’m guessing the creators of him noticed this and he wasn’t present as a playable character in the final game.
My advice would be. Don’t. Don’t steal anime boys or the girls model. You can make your own or if you’re not hag good at art you can commission an artist to do it for you, that way it would look far less cheap and would be much better
The grammar
This is a bit of a nitpick but there were so many grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the game.
It would be best to fix them before releasing the game next time
The protagonist
In my personal opinion, the protag wasn’t a very likeable character. Half of the game he is just perving on the girl and the other half was exposition. Seriously. I understand the game is trying to get across that the protag finds the girl attractive and that alone is fine, but they did it SO MUCH he honestly came across as a bit of a jerk who was only interested in her body. It’s even worse in the ‘good ending’ where every choice you make is perving on her and staying with her forever no questions asked. It just comes across as so disingenuous and doesn’t help his character at all.
A way to fix this is tone the pervyness of the character by a tonne and instead make him more confused and actually question the girl herself more, instead of just naively following along. While he does sorta do this if you pick the ‘bad ending’ options it doesn’t feel justified to call it a ‘bad ending’ when the protagonist just uses common sense.
The story
So, from what I gathered the premise was you were hospitalised for several years and the girl took care of you. She’s also a yandere who resembled a game character, it’s implied they could be one in the same but that never gets brought up ever again.
My problem with the story is that there’s a few hints of events but there’s never any clarification. This would be fine since it just means there’s a mystery to it. Yet in none of the endings is there any answers which is frustrating
Pacing
FAST. That’s a good way to describe it. VERY VERY FAST. Now I’m not saying that a fast paced game is bad. There are plenty of good fast paced games out there. But it (in my opinion) shouldn’t have been this fast in this game. An example would be one second you’ve just woken up and you’re questioning the girl and the next she’s bathing you and even that lasts a short time and before you know it the game is over.
My advice would be to slow the pace down by a lot. Maybe add some extra events in or hold the moments a little more.
Summary
Overall, I wouldn’t recommend this game. It has an unlikeable protagonist, stolen art, bad grammar and it’s just too fast. I speed runned the entire game (that includes all 3 endings) within half an hour. If you’re looking for a quick thing to play then I could say this would be OK but at the same time it’s just not a good experience to play
The ‘art’
Firstly I’m going to address the elephant in the room. Which is the fact that ALL THE CHARACTERS and their art DO NOT belong to the developer! It’s all stolen and mildly edited from anime’s, whoever made the girls model and possibly other mobile games. If you didn’t know what anime the character came from you don’t have too because every time the protag (for example) speaks and the frankly terrible mouth drawn on lazily. The developer even knows this because back when this was in development and you could pre-order it a character -Jumin Han- was present with the same badly made mouth. To clarify, Jumin was ripped straight from a mobile dating game ‘mystic messenger’ and I’m guessing the creators of him noticed this and he wasn’t present as a playable character in the final game.
My advice would be. Don’t. Don’t steal anime boys or the girls model. You can make your own or if you’re not hag good at art you can commission an artist to do it for you, that way it would look far less cheap and would be much better
The grammar
This is a bit of a nitpick but there were so many grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the game.
It would be best to fix them before releasing the game next time
The protagonist
In my personal opinion, the protag wasn’t a very likeable character. Half of the game he is just perving on the girl and the other half was exposition. Seriously. I understand the game is trying to get across that the protag finds the girl attractive and that alone is fine, but they did it SO MUCH he honestly came across as a bit of a jerk who was only interested in her body. It’s even worse in the ‘good ending’ where every choice you make is perving on her and staying with her forever no questions asked. It just comes across as so disingenuous and doesn’t help his character at all.
A way to fix this is tone the pervyness of the character by a tonne and instead make him more confused and actually question the girl herself more, instead of just naively following along. While he does sorta do this if you pick the ‘bad ending’ options it doesn’t feel justified to call it a ‘bad ending’ when the protagonist just uses common sense.
The story
So, from what I gathered the premise was you were hospitalised for several years and the girl took care of you. She’s also a yandere who resembled a game character, it’s implied they could be one in the same but that never gets brought up ever again.
My problem with the story is that there’s a few hints of events but there’s never any clarification. This would be fine since it just means there’s a mystery to it. Yet in none of the endings is there any answers which is frustrating
Pacing
FAST. That’s a good way to describe it. VERY VERY FAST. Now I’m not saying that a fast paced game is bad. There are plenty of good fast paced games out there. But it (in my opinion) shouldn’t have been this fast in this game. An example would be one second you’ve just woken up and you’re questioning the girl and the next she’s bathing you and even that lasts a short time and before you know it the game is over.
My advice would be to slow the pace down by a lot. Maybe add some extra events in or hold the moments a little more.
Summary
Overall, I wouldn’t recommend this game. It has an unlikeable protagonist, stolen art, bad grammar and it’s just too fast. I speed runned the entire game (that includes all 3 endings) within half an hour. If you’re looking for a quick thing to play then I could say this would be OK but at the same time it’s just not a good experience to play
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Well worth the wait
In my opinion this is really good. It was TOTALLY worth the wait. Great work on this. I just have 1. Can you make more stories for this in the future? Again, TOTALLY worth the wait. This is really well made.
Horrible app
To: PLAY_BOY_RICH I preordered this.
When I preordered this I thought it was gonna be a fun game. Nope it’s horrible the girls facial expressions are a bit strange and whenever you accidentally close out the app... you have to re-start the whole progress again. I wish their was a save button, than sometimes the game glitches.
Not worth the wait.
When I preordered this I thought it was gonna be a fun game. Nope it’s horrible the girls facial expressions are a bit strange and whenever you accidentally close out the app... you have to re-start the whole progress again. I wish their was a save button, than sometimes the game glitches.
Not worth the wait.
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Not good
I honestly was excited to see this game, I preordered it and waited for it to be out, even when there was a delay on the release, but once I played it, it wasn’t what it was talked up to be, a censoring an 18+ game, as well as no saving, I sometimes have to close out of things, and I like how on other apps it’s saved right where I left off. Nope I had to restart it all over again. Also it’s s’pose to be a “love” story, yet it makes me feel like I’m doing an interactive Steven King novel with recycled imagery, and poor style.
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