Constructive criticism
I am by far no grammar or English teacher, but had a hard time concentrating on what they were trying to say in this novel because I was trying to make sense of the wording, due to all the grammatical errors. If an editor would have helped with this book, I think it would have made it more enjoyable to read, and also would have achieved what the writer was really going for and trying to say. For someone having done this as a first attempt at writing, and without an editor, I can then truly say "well done". I would actually look forward to further and future readings to see how time and experience developed a better novel for them. As with any first time author the books only get better over time, and we all have to start from somewhere. No matter if it's in writing or in anything else one sets how to do for the first time. If however this is NOT this persons first attempt writing and/or there was an editor involved, then all I can say is...it appears to have been rushed, because a lot of errors had been overlooked. So my bottom line is...I enjoyed this short story but wish it had been written better. All in all it was pretty good.My favorite game!!
Developer Response
Thank you very much for your review, we are working to bring our users the best reading experience, we really appreciate your constructive criticism, thank you for reading.Clever
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thank you very much, Daisy, we are working very hard to bring you the best reading experience.Outstanding
I really enjoyed this interactive book. I am definitely going to read more of them thank youRawtruth Productions
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thank you very much my friend, did you check our other titles?Nice
Kept my attention ;)MzCeeCee
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check for updates, we would grab your attention even moreLove everything
I love this app it's awesomeMrs.MinHo
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It's a nice job to read the book alone at weekend.mingyike
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thank, we are glad that you enjoyed our bookIt was great
I loved itKiriki-chan
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I like itGoJoP00nSlayer
Love It!!!
It's great and I love how it gives you the decision to decide your next choice.Mbumper
Interactive book!
I wish all books would give you choices, like this book does! It's a must try bookISTIurlittlenightmare
