Really?
Interesting story but way too short and really?...a baby from the past brought to the future to be raised by a nice family would’ve worked too...just saying...Jessi1979
Needs A Copyeditoe
This might be good, but the author needs a good copyeditor. There are too many awkward sentences and other structural issues. I simply got tired of trying to follow it and quit.TomA2
Enjoyed
It’s a short story but it’s awesomelilmomBrooks
Could be MUCH better
Storylines are very short. Just as it starts to get interesting, the story ends abruptly, and changing your choices has relatively little effect on the storyline. On multiple playthroughs with different choices selected, I only discovered three different endings, all quite grim. Additionally, there are very few choices in total per storyline. Interesting world building, competent graphics and sound, but falls far short of its potential. I would say the writing and short length are its main downfalls.
Additionally, once you complete a main storyline, the app is overly insistent in asking for a 5-star review, to the extent you have to click 'No' on three increasingly pointed screens before it will accept your response. Not cool.reviewer070
boring
would've preferred graphics/video - not just long pages of dialogue that went on for too long and a more interesting storyline..JaneLane1978
Meh
The concept is good. The mechanics are fine. The writing was terrible.TejiA2
Immediately crashes
Open the app, it crashes. Deleted, reinstalled. Same problem.Pdk754
Decent app, no glitches
Good artwork, but lame book. Glad it was short.Jadxia
Nice story
Nice storyVanDuke
Book review
GoodCoolswagdude14
