Not working right
The movement control disappears and need to touch on the screen randomly to find it. After many times stuck on the first scene, I deleted it.
感觉很不错
故事讲述比较清晰，只是cpbe多少让人意难平。死亡并不可怕，可怕的是被忘记。希望对话之类的能不用我专门去点，等它反应有点麻烦。
有些对话确实有些不必要一定让我花时间一个一个点。不过从中我也能感受到女主一步步去寻求真相的感觉。
加油吧期待新作。
有些对话确实有些不必要一定让我花时间一个一个点。不过从中我也能感受到女主一步步去寻求真相的感觉。
加油吧期待新作。
没过英语六级都不敢玩
大概能明白故事讲了个啥，但一些细节问题还是不懂，好好学英语吧
Never works
The app is lovely ☺️, until one time ! One day I was playing the game and then I had to go to another place , so when it loads a black screen comes up and I spawn , but this time it took more then an hour !! Then I shut down my iPad then I started it up again.... guess what ? It was just a black screen !!
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Great, some ideas to improve
I think you guys did awesome with the graphics and music, honestly. The characters had interesting and entertaining personalities. The characters were easily distinguishable, by name and personality, and design; the storyline could be easily followed, and made sense, and there was enough plot that I don’t think there were any plot holes and it fulfilled all it needed to fulfill to satisfy its audience, for the most part.
The story line wasn’t bad either. I noticed you dedicated this to someone, may they RIP.
Not a lot was said about them, you know, we might have wanted to know more about him, if it’s not too personal. It could have really enhanced the story. Just like one page full of text about him. Just a thought. Or even a link, you know?
My only 3 issues were:
The buttons seemed slow when continuing forwards sometimes, such as when pinning up photos or clicking “OK”, or entering and exiting places. For a patient person, it really tested my patience as I had no indicators that anything was happening. Gradual is fine, but a bit quicker (.5 seconds) would be awesome.
The second issue is, I feel the story stayed too strictly to info that Sergio wanted to say. I wanted to know a bit more about the Etruscan things, and I know the exhibits showed off these things visually, I wanted to be able to read some of these things.
The third thing was, the open and closed books we were supposed to pin up were hard to distinguish from each other. It was cool to have our narrator tell us what we needed to know about each book, but I felt more could be done. More could be known.
Some people may miss the fact that the box at the excavation site wasn’t moved because, as explained in the dialogue, it was an excavation site or something like it (archaeological/historical site?) and didn’t have visitors yet and was blocked off. In my opinion.
Maybe the grammar could be changed a little imo, for that reason only.
All in all, it was cool to search for things and piece things together and see how the mystery came together. It was interesting to see their past and present selves too.
Last question, I don’t think a lot was said about what happened to that necklace they found when they were kids, or if their parents were proud. Just wondering.
I can tell a lot of time and effort was put in, due to the credits and how the app did not have an overwhelming amount of buttons and kept all things uncluttered. Much appreciated for the work you put in.
The story line wasn’t bad either. I noticed you dedicated this to someone, may they RIP.
Not a lot was said about them, you know, we might have wanted to know more about him, if it’s not too personal. It could have really enhanced the story. Just like one page full of text about him. Just a thought. Or even a link, you know?
My only 3 issues were:
The buttons seemed slow when continuing forwards sometimes, such as when pinning up photos or clicking “OK”, or entering and exiting places. For a patient person, it really tested my patience as I had no indicators that anything was happening. Gradual is fine, but a bit quicker (.5 seconds) would be awesome.
The second issue is, I feel the story stayed too strictly to info that Sergio wanted to say. I wanted to know a bit more about the Etruscan things, and I know the exhibits showed off these things visually, I wanted to be able to read some of these things.
The third thing was, the open and closed books we were supposed to pin up were hard to distinguish from each other. It was cool to have our narrator tell us what we needed to know about each book, but I felt more could be done. More could be known.
Some people may miss the fact that the box at the excavation site wasn’t moved because, as explained in the dialogue, it was an excavation site or something like it (archaeological/historical site?) and didn’t have visitors yet and was blocked off. In my opinion.
Maybe the grammar could be changed a little imo, for that reason only.
All in all, it was cool to search for things and piece things together and see how the mystery came together. It was interesting to see their past and present selves too.
Last question, I don’t think a lot was said about what happened to that necklace they found when they were kids, or if their parents were proud. Just wondering.
I can tell a lot of time and effort was put in, due to the credits and how the app did not have an overwhelming amount of buttons and kept all things uncluttered. Much appreciated for the work you put in.
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