Awesome story
What can I say the story is great
Hoping for second book
Best story that I’ve ever read😍🥰
Great story
could use some touch up with the grammar and spelling tho
Awful grammar and spelling
It was hard to enjoy reading.
I love it!
It’s absolutely amazing I hope u make part 2
Very good story
I greatly enjoyed the story. I wish there were more choices in the story...maybe add in a feature where you can go back and change a decision without having to restart the whole story and also show a few pictures of the characters and their powers.
Please hurry with the next part....that cliffhanger at the end had me replaying the story multiple times.
Please hurry with the next part....that cliffhanger at the end had me replaying the story multiple times.
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Poor grammar
Would love to get into a story like this, unfortunately the spelling and grammar make it almost impossible as there are countless mistakes. :(
Revisions are easy!
If I were to write “thsi gmea is grtae” I would be ashamed. They writers really should have looked over their (notice it is I after E) work even once, they would have caught hundreds of simple mistakes.
Im Wondering
Will there be a part 2 or like a continuation?
Typos
Though the typos and grammatical errors were somewhat distracting, I thoroughly enjoyed the story
It’s a really good story!!
This story is interesting and I love the way it flows. Yes, there are some editing and grammar issues but nothing major. It’s a nice, easy read!!
The elementals
The story was amazing!💯 but the one thing I didn’t like was all the typos it had I mean don’t get me wrong I still went through with the story and had lightning as my element but I think the story would have been better if you fixed all the typos it had but in the end this one was amazing.
The best text game I ever played
I’ve played a lot of text games and this is by far one of the best. I love how the plot unfolded with each choice and word. I really would recommend this game to anyone who’s into this type of game. I also love the unique personalities of each and every character. I’m extremely excited for the next part of this series.
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Potential
have rooms for some touch ups 👌
It’s broken
Am I the only one who has a problem with the gender selection? I picked female but everyone keeps calling me he. I’m so confused.
Great concept, terrible execution
The grammar and writing in this game is awful. The text sounds like a robot who can’t speak English. I love the idea of a playable book and think this is a cool concept but they seriously should have worked with a professional editor before putting this game out. It’s not okay at all to charge for something that reads like someone who can’t speak English at all wrote it.
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What
Honestly a total waste of money. I can’t understand what the “author” is trying to say. I’m only five minutes into this, and trying to makes sense of it is hurting my brain. Do not buy it at all. You may be thinking it can’t be that bad. It is.
Interesting story
At least the setting was interesting, but it’s very unfortunate that the poor grammar and usage of punctuation makes the story difficult to read.
Not worth the time.
I could look past all the spelling errors. But the limited choices and the garbled text was too much. Nothing I selected really seemed to matter and one of my stats glitched and went up to 110%. Relationships with characters seemed pointless and the story is confusing. Don’t bother.
Great story!
I felt it was over all an amazing story that even though I feel like there is not many player decisions and there are quite a few grammatical errors, but I over all was quite impressed with the story after my first play through and can't wait for the 2nd part! There might be quite a few spelling and grammatical errors but I don't feel it took that much out of the game or made it unplayable so keep that in mind.
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