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Very enjoyable love this game
Great story
What can I say it’s a very enjoyable story with lots of options currently 3 chapters in and I’m hooked
Thoughtful & considered CYOA.
Great story, with excellent flow and pace between decisions that really matter and continuations on the journey.
The consequences of the decisions make sense and don’t feel like a coin-flip. The text provides ample clues on some of the wiser choices, which meant I studied and considered the decision points thoughtfully.
The game’s scoring system creates a strong incentive for replays as you look to increase your score next time.
My only critique is the hero commits some casual sexual assault, which is just normalised as a line of two in the text, unnecessary for the story, and doesn’t feel like it is in keeping with the character.
The consequences of the decisions make sense and don’t feel like a coin-flip. The text provides ample clues on some of the wiser choices, which meant I studied and considered the decision points thoughtfully.
The game’s scoring system creates a strong incentive for replays as you look to increase your score next time.
My only critique is the hero commits some casual sexual assault, which is just normalised as a line of two in the text, unnecessary for the story, and doesn’t feel like it is in keeping with the character.
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A really well written text adventure
Not much else to say. Some replay ability as you can make different decisions. Free to it gives many hours of entertainment. Would recommend.
?Malware? Great game aside from this!
I played this game a while ago, it was last updated two years ago, but I still played after or right around the time of the last update, being in late 2021 and this wasn’t a thing. There’s only one other review that mentions it but it says “Update available” then something about your screen briefly flashing and then the update will be complete or something. Feels fishy, and there’s no other button besides for a continue button, can’t get out of it and engage with the game. I wanted to press continue with my vpn active or airplane mode on but was still too sussed out.
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Reading
If you don’t mind reading a lot then this game is a must play. So far the story has been very cultivating. One thing that can be improved upon is the lack of picture or background music. Some background music that can match the scene would help make the game be more immersive.
Well written
Well written and enjoyable, well worth trying if this is your thing. 5 stars from me and thanks to the author :-)
Top adventure book rpg
One of the best books of this type on the app store :)
A true diamond in the rough, this is how you make a game!
This game takes me back to my childhood, sitting down with a nook and reading at night.
Things to note:
There is a “premium” version, but all this does is make it a little easier. You can play all the chapters for free!
A story for the ages, if there was a hard copy I would by it!
Cons:
Some foul language and suggestive themes
(That’s it, that’s the only “bad” thing about this)
If you’re laying in bed sick, and you’re looking for a calm way to pass the time, this is your saving grace!
Things to note:
There is a “premium” version, but all this does is make it a little easier. You can play all the chapters for free!
A story for the ages, if there was a hard copy I would by it!
Cons:
Some foul language and suggestive themes
(That’s it, that’s the only “bad” thing about this)
If you’re laying in bed sick, and you’re looking for a calm way to pass the time, this is your saving grace!
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Enjoying the game so far
I haven’t reached to Florence to the game. Our, I was loving the story. The only issue I’m facing is the while using voiceover on the iPhone, I can’t figure out what my stats are in terms of his points or anything else. All I can hear or random numbers and that’s it! furthermore, I’m not sure what are the numbers behind some of the choices are exactly.
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Nothing like it!!!
I have not played a game like this before on mobile. The story is great and I really feel connected to the main hero. Highly recommend this game!!
Good game
I really like this game as a time waster to use on car rides and the like so I definitely recommend it, it doesn’t take to long for the story to start picking up and whenever you make the right choices it rewards you well but when you make the wrong choice it can scare you a bit but you aren’t going to start all the way over with just a few mistakes so I really like it.
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First type of game
This is the first story telling game I’ve played and it seems to really be strict which is nice I can’t buy things whenever save whenever ect listening to your strengths and what your team comp is has really helped
Didn’t expect it to be this good
After the first episode I was hooked even though this was my first real text adventure game. I will say that a lot of the choices seem inconsequential as they just kill you if you get it wrong, but besides that it is very fun and well written. Definitely worth the 5 star rating.
Gripping!
Excellent narrative! Don’t have to pay to play. Although at this point I will pay for that final chapter. Damien Black, name your price
Great story!
Although I didn’t make it far into the story I really enjoy the writing and characters in it, it’s a great way to pass the time and a good choice for those who like text based rpgs.
Great game
the game is great, I hope they can finish this
A must for fantasy fans
The story, lore and characters are all very well written. This is the most fun I’ve had with a mobile game in a really long time. Hope more chapters get released soon!
good job Damien
The world you’re able to put together with all of its lore is outstanding. Keep doing what you’re doing. I’m looking forward to chapter 8
Excellent
Immersive story, well written, a very good game
