Short
Short and lame....
Please, please, PLEASE take a remedial English class!!
People, please: Grammar & writing skills are very important - ESPECIALLY if you're going to create an entirely text-based game! I couldn't even stand to get more than a couple pages in, so I have no idea whether or not the *story's* any good.
3Class
I am very sorry the game is perfect I was being ditsy and accidentally did the wrong thing keep up the good work Now I'm stuck Though LOL
Good concept but poor grammar
I was intrigued by the concept of the game. It's appealing but the grammar is shoddy especially for a TEXT based game. If the writing is updated and using proper font (capitalization, spacing, and bold/italicizes/underline) then this game is redeemable.
Keep up the hard work.
Keep up the hard work.
No fun involved
Poorly written and grammatical errors.
