Nope!
The story like the other reviewer said is seriously a summarization. I found myself frustrated and laughing at how ridiculously predictable everything was. Yikes. The main character is so pathetic and in all sorts of ways that I wouldn’t even know where to start. Double yikes. Not even worth a dollar.
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An absolute rip-off!
When you first open this app, you start a story and at the very end of the story, to be able to read just the LAST page, it says you need to purchase it for $5.99! But it implies you will be unlocking other stories. Well I stupidly did that so I could read other stories but literally after unlocking and skimming thru the last page that was poorly written because it was rushed...that was it!? No other stories are available. So I paid $5.99 for ONE page of story!!??
Are you kidding me??? TOTAL RIPOFF!! DO NOT PURCHASE ANYTHING, you will not get anything for it.!!
Are you kidding me??? TOTAL RIPOFF!! DO NOT PURCHASE ANYTHING, you will not get anything for it.!!
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Steve is a nut job
Bro, what a toxic relationship
Unexpected
I love all the different paths this story can take from finding love to being left crushed. It has some grammatical errors & I wouldn’t mind it to be steamier lol but overall it’s a book that’s worth it.
App froze
Great book, excellent price after trial. So Who is taking my time reading through all the different possible endings to the book and In the app froze. But then I deleted the app and reloaded it and it worked fine. It was fun to read through the different endings and possibilities so I am still reading through the different options in the story. Well the grammar is often not quite right, Send your stand that English is probably a second language for this writer. So the grammatical mistakes did not bother me. At times hard to put down!
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Interesting
I've only read one, but it is certainly interesting. I definitely want to read more of them.
It was amazing
Loved that it had background music to go with the story it was awesome ready and the writing was exceptional
Waste of time
F**k this app.
Really they bribe you with havin bad sex
Wow
Wow
Very enticing and interactive very cool
Disappointing despite the wonderful idea
The writing here is not like your typical novel: it's a summarization. There's no description that piques your imagination, no drama, horrible grammar, and practically no plot. It's extremely short and the only two features that I find interesting were the pictures and the explanations of the choices given. It's a good thing that this doesn't cost money because it would've been a total rip-off.
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Love
Loooovvvve it
👌
👍😉
Long
The story should be longer
Response from developer
Hello, thanks for your review, we are working constantly to bring you the best reading experience in the world.
Constructive criticism
I am by far no grammar or English teacher, but had a hard time concentrating on what they were trying to say in this novel because I was trying to make sense of the wording, due to all the grammatical errors. If an editor would have helped with this book, I think it would have made it more enjoyable to read, and also would have achieved what the writer was really going for and trying to say. For someone having done this as a first attempt at writing, and without an editor, I can then truly say "well done". I would actually look forward to further and future readings to see how time and experience developed a better novel for them. As with any first time author the books only get better over time, and we all have to start from somewhere. No matter if it's in writing or in anything else one sets how to do for the first time. If however this is NOT this persons first attempt writing and/or there was an editor involved, then all I can say is...it appears to have been rushed, because a lot of errors had been overlooked. So my bottom line is...I enjoyed this short story but wish it had been written better. All in all it was pretty good.
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Clever
Clever
Outstanding
I really enjoyed this interactive book. I am definitely going to read more of them thank you
Nice
Kept my attention ;)
Love everything
I love this app it's awesome
Interesting
Gave it a try out of curiosity n actually quite enjoyed the concept, many possible endings too, impressed
