Just fun!
This is a clever idea and the first story was written well enough to keep my attention and didn’t suffer from the malaise that the original CYOA books of the 80’s were plagued with.
It's okay.
It's light entertainment, albeit very short. It's no literary masterpiece, but it's a fun little time filler. What bothers me most is the many missing quotation marks. Please proofread and fix; it is simple and relatively fast to do, so there's really no excuse for this.
Interesting and fun
It is a little short, I’d like more choices. The graphics are very nice. I shut off the music, it was not necessary to my enjoyment of the game. I’ve only gone through it once, so interested how different choices may affect the story.
Past mistakes
I like the game but it played fine until I made the choice for Collins to open the container and then the screen turned black and went blank so I shut it down and rebooted my iPad thinking that would fix the problem but instead now it just sits on the main page with no sound and doesn’t do anything and won’t go back to the story or anything else! It just stays where it’s at if I can’t play the game what’s the point in keeping it?
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Past mistakes
Would have like more. More of everything. It was fun
Good story
s a fan of this type of story I long to read the rest. It has captured my imagination!
Good app, poor story
First things first: the story is very weak. I would have given only 1 star, but the concept was okay, and the app itself worked as promised. When you are asked to make a choice in the story you have an opportunity to change your mind, which I appreciated.
Terrible book
Time wasted, it is just a lame time travel story
Very good !
Going for another roung.
Good
Good but too short :)
Liked it
Liked it.
Short
A great story, and creative endings, but it would be much better if it was longer.
Quite good but needs more length
Love science fiction.
Nice work.
Good story, interesting ideas throughout.
Captivating
Reminiscent of the PBS “Dr. Who” series. Great depth in the story but as others have said .. comes to an ending too soon
I will read it with different options and see how things change but it will likely still be very short.
Good job on the story line.
I will read it with different options and see how things change but it will likely still be very short.
Good job on the story line.
Pass the time
Entertaining.
Really?
Interesting story but way too short and really?...a baby from the past brought to the future to be raised by a nice family would’ve worked too...just saying...
Needs A Copyeditoe
This might be good, but the author needs a good copyeditor. There are too many awkward sentences and other structural issues. I simply got tired of trying to follow it and quit.
Doesn't work
Crashes immediately upon opening on an iPhone 5, iOS 10.3.3
Enjoyed
It’s a short story but it’s awesome
