Great
Great
WHAT?
What exactly is being said? Due to the grammar, I can’t even work out what’s going on - I’ve been on chapter 1 (but only 7 paragraphs into it) for more than an hour, because each paragraph/sentence is nonsensical. I’m from a nationality where English is supposed to be my second language (even though I mostly only know the English language and not my own culture’s), but it still doesn’t change the fact that this story doesn’t even make sense. When talking about other people, they are called: I, me, he (for a female), she (for a male) or you. EG from this story: “I looked at me with a sloppy eye”. Obviously it’s supposed to be “she looked at me”. But the other part is when they talk about a traitor and betrayal - where did that even come from? It appeared from thin air and without any context whatsoever. I’m not sure if I’m going to bother continuing with this app, as it has given me a migraine!
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