Good story, but lackluster editing
Story is fun so far, but the editing (capitalization, punctuation, sentence flow) was so problematic that I can’t continue with it. A good editorial pass would make this game shine.
Fun game
Love the reference to zombie exodus in the first chapter with the cathedral and Tom and mindy haha!
Ok
Ok
Favourite Choice of Games
This has easily been my favourite choice of games as it is so massively varied in its genres throughout the game - you have the ability to create drastically different storylines, which gives it immense replay-ability.
I love the fleshed-out characters and felt myself getting truly bonded to them through all their little quirks. Felt deep pangs of guilt for every one I couldn’t save.
I’m writing this at 0155h after replaying this game for god-knows which time. I come back to it every so often because it’s just that good.
I love the fleshed-out characters and felt myself getting truly bonded to them through all their little quirks. Felt deep pangs of guilt for every one I couldn’t save.
I’m writing this at 0155h after replaying this game for god-knows which time. I come back to it every so often because it’s just that good.
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The game:
Loved it. Kinda short but still amazing. I am confused tho. How is Rachel pregnant? I didn’t go near her.
Great Story and Caricatures!
I’m Currently half way though the story and my caricature name is Benjamin Smith and its been great so far with great story and caricatures! I Definitely recommend you downloading this app, there are a few grammar errors though but does not change the story at all.
Really enjoy, but some errors.
Great job on the game but I have noticed some errors with the Jacob romance storyline. There is no relationship progress value for him showing as well as his pronouns are mixed up with the Sarah romance storyline. Please fix! Then I’d be happy to adjust my rating.
Pretty fun. A few errors
I've replayed this game five or six times today trying to get all of the achievements. What I have found is that there is very little variation.
So it's kind of if you do a you end up at c but if you do b you either die and restart or you get sort of shoved awkwardly into b.
The stats don't seem to make a huge difference and the two sets of stats i.e. Strength, leadership etc and scavenging, (whatever else is in that section) kind of makes it hard to tell what is actually happening.
It's a cool game and a neat idea but it could benefit from more choice and variation (and proof reading)
So it's kind of if you do a you end up at c but if you do b you either die and restart or you get sort of shoved awkwardly into b.
The stats don't seem to make a huge difference and the two sets of stats i.e. Strength, leadership etc and scavenging, (whatever else is in that section) kind of makes it hard to tell what is actually happening.
It's a cool game and a neat idea but it could benefit from more choice and variation (and proof reading)
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It was so good until u had to pay
It was so good well written story that would've deserved a five star rating if I didn't have to pay. That was a number one downfall mostly because it gets u attached to ur character and then u have to delete because u don't want to buy it. Although besides that it was a well written story with interesting decisions and plot.
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Grammar, and ending
I like the book for the most part but as others said the grammar and spelling was displeasing. I often caught words misspelt, enough to actually bother me. The only other complaint I had was my ending wasn't all that good. Unlike other authors the ending wasn't really that great.
okay
i really liked the story, the characters, and the options presented. however, there were so many errors in pronouns. my male love interest was frequently referred to as she/her. parts that were supposed to be about him switched from him to sarah. ex. jacob was in your bed, you were happy about it. as you held her closer, you were so glad you'd met sarah. i'd give it four or five stars otherwise. most games i tend to ignore little typos and such, but there were SO many that it was extremely distracting. however, i do think the game is worth the money. it's unique and i enjoyed it:)
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Amazing game
Probably my favourite choice game and I can't wait too see what comes out in the future!
I just needed to say this
SPOILER:
ABSOLUTELY loved the references to zombie exodus. I'm absolutely thrilled to see a lot of the characters before they got together
ABSOLUTELY loved the references to zombie exodus. I'm absolutely thrilled to see a lot of the characters before they got together
Great game but........
I loved the story line even though I didn't have the money to spend on getting the full story still had a great story and good grammar but I do wish this game was free to play the full story instead of just part of it
Very Well Written
This story is extremely well written and intriguing. I cannot recommend it enough, other than the fact that you have to pay for the third chapter. Even if you do not want to play, you should still read it because it's THAT good.
Titles
I love this book/game I just wish that I could buy the other chapters but I currently can't but so far I love this book there are some things that I dislike but not enough to where it get four stars it still gets five stars
Fun but can't play
The game is fun but I can't play it because I Have to enter a code, and no madder what I put in it says at least write something even though I did
An afternoon well spent
Genuinely loved this. It's self aware, makes you feel Iike a hero and offers a lot of choice. On my second read and really blown away by the impact you can have. I'm in an utterly different world and everyone is alive!
It is exactly what it holds itself out to be. A decent text based adventure. Love it
It is exactly what it holds itself out to be. A decent text based adventure. Love it
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Great but buggy
I love this game. I really do. My only problem is a bug in the village of the aliens (with the nano control device) where if I touch the monitor during the day it doesn't read any inputs. The game then becomes unplayable as I can't leave the screen until I enter something and the game can't understand me entering me anything. I'd love a fix for that.
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Pretty poor text adventure
As text adventures go, this wasn't a good effort. Granted, the storyline is detailed and engaging if you are playing it for the first time, but there is little real opportunity to make decisions through your choices except at a few key points in the game. And playing it through more than once means having to wade through pages of text.
And if you make the mistake of choosing Sarah as your partner in the game, you can NEVER undo that decision, no matter what choices you make later. She's a really clingy, needy character and makes no contribution to enhancing your gameplay at all.
I got bored with it quite early on. All of the characters are one dimensional, I really couldn't have cared less what happened to them. None of your choices made any difference to your relationship stats; none of your abilities (or lack of them) effected the role play. And again, decisions made later in the game made no difference to skills and ability stats.
The lengthy and detailed text, the lack of opportunity to make game changing decisions, the one dimensional characterisation and the teeth-grittingly annoying partnership with the vine-like Sarah character, meant I was doing little more than racing through what was left of the story just to get to the end.
And if you make the mistake of choosing Sarah as your partner in the game, you can NEVER undo that decision, no matter what choices you make later. She's a really clingy, needy character and makes no contribution to enhancing your gameplay at all.
I got bored with it quite early on. All of the characters are one dimensional, I really couldn't have cared less what happened to them. None of your choices made any difference to your relationship stats; none of your abilities (or lack of them) effected the role play. And again, decisions made later in the game made no difference to skills and ability stats.
The lengthy and detailed text, the lack of opportunity to make game changing decisions, the one dimensional characterisation and the teeth-grittingly annoying partnership with the vine-like Sarah character, meant I was doing little more than racing through what was left of the story just to get to the end.
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