I have a lot of great thoughts but have no idea how to say them, so, here goes with what I’m able to say.
Let’s get the, like, one or two negative things out of the way. It’s to short! It’s the best thing ever aside from being too short! There could also be a slightly more alterable story, which I think would best come with a longer story.
Let me put something else into perspective. You are doing all of this stuff, in, oh, about one in-game week. That’s the entire span of time for the main story. I feel like there could be much more. There is potential!
Now on to some of the best points: I love the characters. From David to Detective Toomy, I’m kind of sad it’s over quite quickly. The characters developed really well, and the option to... er... flirt with some of them is quite interesting. Although the story as a whole isn’t too impacted by your choices, all of the finer and more sensitive details are. Including your stats, which, for the first time in nearly any text-based story, actually mean something.
Like I said, it’s sad it’s over quite quickly, but for what it’s worth, it’s like a good book, better even, since you can impact those finer details. Which thus allows for many “rereads” that are each different.
Of course, all good things come to an end, and so must the story of Moreytown. I could really go on and on, but I think I’ve gone on way longer than I should. For one final, sum-up opinion: it is currently and probably will forever be the best thing I’ve ever done. Even with its flaws and rather short storyline. To me, way worth $3.99. 10/10 would recommend, and 13/10 would play an extended version.
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Ethan Starshine
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