ZERO Stars!
If I could complain and have this app removed I would. I know the small child who tried to translate this writing into English was probably starved and whipped often but even still he could have done a better job...
Spelling-F
Grammar (use of actual words)-F
Sentence structure-F
Choices-D
Endings- to painful and trying to even continue to the end.
Seems like there is a lot of content here but why would anyone put this up in its current state?
I AM embarrassed and humiliated for this writer and buying this game. I am taking this app off my phone for fear of being seen with it. Horrible just horrible.
I don't even count this as a choice game.
Spelling-F
Grammar (use of actual words)-F
Sentence structure-F
Choices-D
Endings- to painful and trying to even continue to the end.
Seems like there is a lot of content here but why would anyone put this up in its current state?
I AM embarrassed and humiliated for this writer and buying this game. I am taking this app off my phone for fear of being seen with it. Horrible just horrible.
I don't even count this as a choice game.
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Grammar is awful...
Reads like it's been translated from Google Translate in some places. The grammar is terrible and distracting to the point I couldn't get past one chapter.
Would be passable in an adventure or RPG game but in a text game it's inexcusable. Don't waste your money.
Would be passable in an adventure or RPG game but in a text game it's inexcusable. Don't waste your money.
Good, could be better
Pros: very long, good storyline.
Cons: choices only effect stats, and only effect storyline marginally, grammar issues, but you get use to them, and predictability.
Overall it's a good game, if the author could just fix the grammar issues and possibly make the choices have more away in the storyline then this would be possibly THE best choice of games books!
Note to author; Please finish the series, I loved it and would love to see the 2nd 3rd and 4th parts!
- a hopeful reader.
Cons: choices only effect stats, and only effect storyline marginally, grammar issues, but you get use to them, and predictability.
Overall it's a good game, if the author could just fix the grammar issues and possibly make the choices have more away in the storyline then this would be possibly THE best choice of games books!
Note to author; Please finish the series, I loved it and would love to see the 2nd 3rd and 4th parts!
- a hopeful reader.
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Horrible
That's very blunt but true, I can't make my self enjoy this , I tried and failed
You should be ashamed.
What is this rubbish? Terrible grammar.
The writing is incomprehensible.
DO NOT WASTE YOUR MONEY ON THIS.
The writing is incomprehensible.
DO NOT WASTE YOUR MONEY ON THIS.
No
Story was ok at best, but the grammar was so bad. I thought it might get better, but was consistently bad throughout. Also it appears like your choices have no effect on the game.
Nope
The amount of grammar mistakes plus bad sentence structure left me with a headache. This is not worth the 2 dollars I spent
Terrible English & lots of it
Hard to read from dreadful unedited or proofread text, and not an interesting choice or consequence in over 3 long chapters. Not good. Can't remember if I paid, but if I did, I want a refund (seriously). Deleted.
My opinion
I liked the story very much it seems well thought out. The down side is the grammar but personally this doesn't bother me all that much.
Fairly good
The world depth was excellent and the story length was very good. That said the story could have been more understandable had the author used a English fluent editor. If the game had better English it would have been rated a 4.5 to 5 but at its current rating it is still a good game
And expect much from this author in the future
And expect much from this author in the future
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