Yikes
This company needs to have quality control on the people who publish using this software. The writing is awful, possibly English as a second language, or just someone who can’t make proper sentences, and it reflects badly on the company.
Thank God I didn't buy this game!
Really really poor writing and formatting.
There was no actual point to the story; the ending was abrupt and inconclusive and there was no skill or behaviour points system to follow the choies you made - as you usually find with all other Hosted Games. In fact, some of the so called "choices" weren't actually Choices at all!
I can't believe Hosted Games allowed this dross to be published. It's not even fit for a first draft. I'm only grateful that I didn't buy it.
There was no actual point to the story; the ending was abrupt and inconclusive and there was no skill or behaviour points system to follow the choies you made - as you usually find with all other Hosted Games. In fact, some of the so called "choices" weren't actually Choices at all!
I can't believe Hosted Games allowed this dross to be published. It's not even fit for a first draft. I'm only grateful that I didn't buy it.
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Disappointing
There might be a well-designed game in here but I can't make it past the bad writing to find out.
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Dreadful
The writing in this game is truly insufferable, considering that someone chose to publish it.
It reads as if written by a small child; basic narration, and terrible grammar.
Do not buy!
It reads as if written by a small child; basic narration, and terrible grammar.
Do not buy!
