Yikes
This company needs to have quality control on the people who publish using this software. The writing is awful, possibly English as a second language, or just someone who can’t make proper sentences, and it reflects badly on the company.
Thank God I didn't buy this game!
Really really poor writing and formatting.
There was no actual point to the story; the ending was abrupt and inconclusive and there was no skill or behaviour points system to follow the choies you made - as you usually find with all other Hosted Games. In fact, some of the so called "choices" weren't actually Choices at all!
I can't believe Hosted Games allowed this dross to be published. It's not even fit for a first draft. I'm only grateful that I didn't buy it.
There was no actual point to the story; the ending was abrupt and inconclusive and there was no skill or behaviour points system to follow the choies you made - as you usually find with all other Hosted Games. In fact, some of the so called "choices" weren't actually Choices at all!
I can't believe Hosted Games allowed this dross to be published. It's not even fit for a first draft. I'm only grateful that I didn't buy it.
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Disappointing
There might be a well-designed game in here but I can't make it past the bad writing to find out.
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Top notch
Dreadful
The writing in this game is truly insufferable, considering that someone chose to publish it.
It reads as if written by a small child; basic narration, and terrible grammar.
Do not buy!
It reads as if written by a small child; basic narration, and terrible grammar.
Do not buy!
Good try
Keep it up
Pretty good but there's room for improvement
This is definitely not the best CoG out there, but for a completely free game, it's pretty good. There are some grammar mistakes that need to be fixed and I would personally appreciate more background information on my character. Also the mortality bar is broken. Though I have to admit I'm wondering what's going to happen next. So if the next one is free as well I may check it out.
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Cool
I really like this game but I think it should have more details about the characters and the background story about the factions. But overall it isn't bad I'd play it again. :)
Really?
This game could have been so much better. The idea for the story isn't bad but the writing is absolutely awful. If the author takes some writing classes and then rewrites the story it might be good.
Worst CoG game ever
This is the absolute worst Choice of Games book of 2015 and possibly of all time. None of the choices matter. The writing is absolutely atrocious, just look at the preview screenshots for proof.
The last straw for me was when I saw a stupid emoticon in the text, along with the "this isn't a real choice, just here for giggles" line. Seriously? Just avoid this piece of trash.
The last straw for me was when I saw a stupid emoticon in the text, along with the "this isn't a real choice, just here for giggles" line. Seriously? Just avoid this piece of trash.
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Are you kidding me!!!!
This is a monstrosity and a shame for HG titles! The story has many grammatical errors and is written very very bad, and when I say bad I mean with an IQ of 50. HG has very few truly disappointing titles but this one makes me feel ripped off! Paying 2.99 for something of this quality! It took me 15 minutes to finish it and there are like 0 and I mean 0 choices that matter. The writing was the worst I have ever seen. Stay away from this one. This should be removed from HG it has no right to be even close to the great titles like Tin Star, ZE and many many more!
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