Ends too quickly.
You go on 3 missions. You just pick a choice at the end and nothing happens. Was fun. Tho I won’t be trying to attempt other choices, all it is trying to be is a game you can complete within 30 minutes that wastes time. Make longer games
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Honestly, I don’t know what to say about the game itself, since I mainly payed attention to the story and choices. Although, I absolutely loved everything, the story, the mechanics, and variety.
i love the game but there’s an issue
for some reasons i’ve completely destroyed ling’s BDS armor but she could still deflect my attack with it... somehow
What???????!!!!!!!! Incredible
Best text based game I have ever played, I need a part 2, that ending is crazy. I need a part 2!!! What do you need to make a part 2? If it is money, set up a Kickstarter and I will put some money, perhaps I could convince other friends to pitch in as well. Doesn’t matter, I need a part 2, please!!!
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Has potential, but writing needs work...
To summarize my criticism, this game has very creative mini-games and combat sequences, an interesting enough premise, and some cool world-building, but reading through dialogue becomes very painfully awkward early on.
I played until just after the second mission. I haven’t played as a female character, so I can’t speak to that experience, but as a male character there is not really any opportunity given for your character to develop a platonic friendship with the male npcs, or at least not up to the point where I quit. On the other hand, the two main female characters I had the chance to interact with have very one-dimensional personalities, and seem only to serve as sex interests. What I mean by this is that, very quickly, you know more about their body type than you do about their philosophies and motivations, and the dialogue is very unrealistic. This might sound harsh but frankly it feels catered to a horny pubescent boy’s ideal female interactions. I’m a 30 year old guy, and I just couldn’t feel an interest in playing this character.
After your second mission, there is a female character who you have no option of avoiding. She is pretty immature and forward for a character who is supposed to be a highly educated and professional adult, and even if you pick the most hostile dialogue options with her, she is still coming into your room every night.
If the premise of a story includes that you are playing as a man with low willpower and extreme sexual desperation, then this can be excused, but for this game it’s just really awkward and distracting. If the writer wants to make a story that involves a lot of risqué behavior in what is otherwise a story about being in an elite futuristic military force, that’s fine, but I don’t think this is how it’s done.
Others have commented on the spelling and grammar but that’s the last thing I would address. I just think the writer needs some outside perspective on how to write natural characters.
I played until just after the second mission. I haven’t played as a female character, so I can’t speak to that experience, but as a male character there is not really any opportunity given for your character to develop a platonic friendship with the male npcs, or at least not up to the point where I quit. On the other hand, the two main female characters I had the chance to interact with have very one-dimensional personalities, and seem only to serve as sex interests. What I mean by this is that, very quickly, you know more about their body type than you do about their philosophies and motivations, and the dialogue is very unrealistic. This might sound harsh but frankly it feels catered to a horny pubescent boy’s ideal female interactions. I’m a 30 year old guy, and I just couldn’t feel an interest in playing this character.
After your second mission, there is a female character who you have no option of avoiding. She is pretty immature and forward for a character who is supposed to be a highly educated and professional adult, and even if you pick the most hostile dialogue options with her, she is still coming into your room every night.
If the premise of a story includes that you are playing as a man with low willpower and extreme sexual desperation, then this can be excused, but for this game it’s just really awkward and distracting. If the writer wants to make a story that involves a lot of risqué behavior in what is otherwise a story about being in an elite futuristic military force, that’s fine, but I don’t think this is how it’s done.
Others have commented on the spelling and grammar but that’s the last thing I would address. I just think the writer needs some outside perspective on how to write natural characters.
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Worth of my time
The story is really good making you choose the decisions of ur character the i love how the devs mix it the action sci fi genre with some touch of romance i wish they made the story longer but yeah it is what it is i love this game keep it up
Continuation? Please add more content. PLS
I was pleasantly surprised by how this game makes the reader interact and make content changing decisions.
I just wish there was more content to read and experience. Please make another addition to this story.
Also this game is free, the amount of writing and probable story boarding the writers have gone through must have been a long time! This game should cost money.
I just wish there was more content to read and experience. Please make another addition to this story.
Also this game is free, the amount of writing and probable story boarding the writers have gone through must have been a long time! This game should cost money.
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Good game, few mistakes
Within the dialog I found minor spelling mistakes. The story is great with great amounts of detail with the option to go over or skip it. I enjoyed the multiple choice aspect and the training you require to get certain choices. It’s a great game despite the petty flaws. Would recommend
Great story
I really liked this game. It was exciting and it played with my emotions
Nice
Kinda short but still a good story
Fantasic
I love this game but my only complaint is that it doesn't continue on, please make a sequel or something
Pretty good game I guess.
All you guys complaining about the boss battles are just mad that you can't beat them. I found out pretty easy to beat the bosses and I thought that this was a pretty good game. I was wondering if you would actually make the chronomancers plz. I'm a big fan of these types of games. The storyline was pretty good but I'm giving it four stars because of grammatical errors.
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Very good
Only complaint that is there are a lot of spelling mistakes
Great
Awesome game, but it is a little short
Silent gear... more like Metal gea- *cough*!
If you’re a fan of MGS, this game is for you XD.
Love can bloom on the battlefield boys!!!
Love can bloom on the battlefield boys!!!
Rigged
Boss battles are rigged where even if you destroy their systems they can still use them but if yours get destroyed you cant. Therefore the ai spams attacks you cant defend against but you cant do the same
Meh
Could have been good but it’s too hard to get past all the spelling, grammar and syntax errors. The dialogue doesn’t flow naturally and neither does the narration, which isn’t great in terms of far too much telling and unnecessary details.
Great game
Must have
A MUST PLAY
This has seriously one of the most interesting and immersive game i have played yet, the story is not linear and boring, it's goes out of its way and creates something different, plus, it even has its own version of "Boss" levels. Its seriously such a blast to play, although I hope there is a part 2 of the story, the way it ended....just seemed so....abrupt. 4.5/5 I highly recommend it.
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This is an amazing game
For the first time in a long time I actually cared about a game for more than 5 or 6 days, the characters are good and the story telling is amazing. The only problem was the ending, it was lackluster and didn't go with the rest of the story.
