Too short
The game is ok but the story is just too short.
Bad writing and poor choices
Very dry and short writing. Lacking charm and fluidity. Hard to be engaged in the story. Choices start with "would you attack..." Instead of "DO you...". Also the choices are yes or no. Do or don't. Not much of a story impact between speak or don't say a word all the time. Poorly constructed imo.
I am taking pity on this review.
I'd say this is really a 2 star book. I feel bad saying it because I even got the second installment and that was also 2 star.
I can see what the writer was going for and its an ok story. Basically you are a Cleric/Priest but really the story is lack luster most of the time, shallow is the word for it in almost every respect. Sometimes settings don't make sense and there are some grammar and spelling issues that make you give up and move on.
The upside is that the second part you pay for is a bit better and that's why it got 2 stars.
I can see what the writer was going for and its an ok story. Basically you are a Cleric/Priest but really the story is lack luster most of the time, shallow is the word for it in almost every respect. Sometimes settings don't make sense and there are some grammar and spelling issues that make you give up and move on.
The upside is that the second part you pay for is a bit better and that's why it got 2 stars.
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Not bad
The writing is very good, however the story does not appeal to me personally. I played the game and it was good enough to buy the second part, however it is on the short side and very Limited in regards to replay value.
Needs a copy editor
A meandering mess that somehow manages to also be fun. Call it a 'dollar dreadful.'
